Everything is Not What it Seems

Everything is Not What it Seems

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unique-love By unique-love Updated Aug 16, 2012

we all no the story of high school... the popular cheerleaders, the notorious jocks, the geeky nerds, and lets not forget the quarterback/head cheerleader realtionship... well in this story, everything is not wat it seems

dreamernow31 dreamernow31 Aug 20, 2012
I agree with the comment below me. It seems so rushed. I can't see the connection between some of the sentences too. Also, you're missing some capitalizations. The concept is good, but the way of writing it could be improved.
AshleyM101 AshleyM101 Aug 18, 2012
It feels like you wrote the story in a rush and maybe you should read it over again and help it flow a little better
TheDementorsKiss TheDementorsKiss Aug 17, 2012
Needs editing, really badly. Other than that, I love your cover and the story line so far!