we all no the story of high school... the popular cheerleaders, the notorious jocks, the geeky nerds, and lets not forget the quarterback/head cheerleader realtionship... well in this story, everything is not wat it seems
I agree with the comment below me. It seems so rushed. I can't see the connection between some of the sentences too. Also, you're missing some capitalizations. The concept is good, but the way of writing it could be improved.
It feels like you wrote the story in a rush and maybe you should read it over again and help it flow a little better
Needs editing, really badly. Other than that, I love your cover and the story line so far!