You lost everything you held close. Being a ninja from the fire village that one day burned down. You were taken into the hidden leaf village where you began a new life filled with mystery, action, and forbidden romance.
♚[© 2015 | @Anuyushi]♛
Usually in a story, I wouldn't favor beginnings like this, but you made me hooked 😄
I little contructive critisism your orbs is your whole eyeball. If you want to use another word for eyes just use irises. But so far so good