Enchantment | ongoing

Enchantment | ongoing

13.2K Reads 454 Votes 4 Part Story
Daniel By bullethood Updated Jun 26

In which a guy doesn't know what takes over him to share his first kiss with a not so random girl.



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sokay, english isn't my main language either but if anything, you are doing just fine! :D
your english is perfect so far. you don't have anything to be worried about.
honestly i think angelina jolie fits the dark mood of this story but ofc she's way older than ryan guzman so 😂
books4Cjo books4Cjo Jul 23
Hm... I thought she'd be more of a "girl next door" type of character. I think you should've switched her and Victoria's representations (?).
kaykay_202 kaykay_202 Oct 18
You are doing really good so far, but I just wanted to know, what is your main language?
So pretty wish I was that beautiful I look like a potato and a duck 😂😞😂