Potent Potential

Potent Potential

19 Part Story 61.1K Reads 1.4K Votes
SidneyArden By SidneyArden Updated Feb 28, 2013

The future, 2400, is not the technology abundant world we imagined it. Flying cars and artificially intelligent robots aren’t given a second thought when you have to use every brain cell for survival.

In 2409, Crimson Fog, one of the largest, strongest gangs, had some trouble with a group who believed themselves to be ‘gang resistance’. A small group of idiots who wanted the old ways back. After a few deaths and plenty of beatings, they surrendered. Two orphans were left with Crimson.

The Crimson Orphan, Jax, sixteen in 2423, was raised to become one of the world’s best gunslingers. One of her greatest challenges was high school.

nevitac nevitac Sep 19, 2011 06:35AM
Keep up the good work waiting with bated breath for the next part :)
This sounds really good, I've always liked these kinds of stories and I think I'm going to love this one.
Phrankiestar Phrankiestar Jun 26, 2011 05:27PM
This is an amazing story. I adore the characters and have become very attached. I cant wait for more of the tale to be told.xoxoxoxo
Dudgemaster Dudgemaster May 05, 2011 07:39PM
I absolutely love this book! Its so captivating I read ten chapters in one night! I WANT MORE!
Wezzle Wezzle Mar 11, 2011 07:48PM
your work is really good so ive saved it in my library definitely going to be reading that before i go bed :) 
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Oct 07, 2010 12:47PM
I love the almost postapolcalyptic set up to this, a really grand opening chapter and nicely written. Well worth a vote and i look forward to the remaining story.