Don't like it don't read it
Update 21.11 : Jesus christ this book is so old and has bad grammar please read a book of mine that is well written (at least a bit) and not this
Like, "hey, it's me! Bill! The dude you hate! And I'm kissing your great nephew! Good to see ya, old pal!"
My friend dared me to read this because the grammer (no offense) isn't really good and I can't stand bad grammer,but this was a wonderful story.
The story is wonderful but being the grammar Nazi that I am
The grammar blows some serious invisi dick
Why didn't you just go back and Re edit it? Like idc but just asking *shrug*
By then. I would love to stay but as a daughter of Athena bad grammar is like torture for me.
Way way way. Was he not in his room with Mabel I'm confizzled