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The Time Traveller's Heart

The Time Traveller's Heart

7.2K Reads 610 Votes 8 Part Story
Rebekah M. By Aphrodite270 Updated Jul 25, 2016

Magic only happens in books. It only happens in movies. Wrong.

Hannah McCracken never believed in magic, until she found a book that allowed her to travel to different time periods. The book took her back to her world when it decided, and not when she decided. The time period it chooses, is the only one that can be visited.

Camden McConnell is a Scottish Warrior who treasures his pride, strength, and clan above all else. Anything that gets in his way is quickly removed, until he meets Hannah. He can't figure her out for everywhere she goes mystery surrounds her. Anytime he tries to get close, she disappears into thin air.

Is there anyway that Hannah can alter the magic that is within the book? Will Camden turn away if he finds out the truth or stay?

Cover done by @MayTijssen

Shiny_Lemon Shiny_Lemon 4 days ago
It's so mysterious, and it makes me so interested in the book! This is what I love about great beginnings, it makes you so interested in what you're about to read!
Bllue- Bllue- Mar 17
This.. Is so mysterious.. And beautiful.. *wipes tears* It makes me wanna read more.. I LOVE MAGIC! You're so good at writing mysteris and spells and notes and everything!!! *0*
c_strive c_strive Jan 02
I'm particularly partial to this prologue. It's far more stylized than many we see, and the short lyrical verse   maintains an enigmatic tone while planting the seeds of magic in our heads, enthralling us into the story.
SiriuslySarcastic SiriuslySarcastic Nov 14, 2016
I'M REALLY INTO THIS RIGHT NOW... But for some reason, I'm imagining a teddy bear with a top hat and brandishing a cane at me, saying this with a raspy voice. XD. But it's really good, how you wrote such simple words into the text, but created this effect that made my eyes pop out, reading this.
ReganLeigh8 ReganLeigh8 Oct 03, 2016
I really like how you start off this book. 
                              The rules draw people in and you can already sense magic and personably a little mystery in the future of this book
ChangingFace ChangingFace Jul 16, 2016
This actually doesn't sound too half bad. I have a character that can time travel too, but it's a little more hands on. I find that poetry format beginnings always calls home to me.