Dawn is a normal girl, or so she thought until her sixteenth birthday comes and a mysterious new boy shows up at school. A very good looking mysterious new boy at that. She made a promise to herself that when she turned sixteen she would run away from home and her abusive father. But when she begins to realize new abilities manifesting after her birthday she seeks out answers. But will her curiousity get the best of her? Is this new boy just a boy? Is her long lost mother just a woman? But these questions are the least of her problems when Demons are lurking around every corner.
Sounds good, but slightly on the heard of side. Who knows though? I can't judge it by the beginning
@saveMefromFalling I don't think your copying at all! Ok, I'll look at your other story too. <^-^>#
@saveMefromFalling if you don't update soon, I'm gonna die. This is so awesome! I must read more. By any chance, have you read a book called The Son Of Eden, first book in the guardian series? Your story plot seems similar and I like it! <^-^>[]
The text itself is good, but I would've found it easier to read if it was in paragraphs. :)