The vampire king is my mate.

The vampire king is my mate.

25.4K Reads 798 Votes 8 Part Story
joibrazille By joibrazille Updated Aug 10

Katie Johnson thought she had it all that was until she met Damien drake the king of all vampires.
Follow me and see what happens next.

  • awesome
  • jealousy
  • katie
  • king
  • romance
MaryWade9 MaryWade9 Aug 10
Sorry, too difficult to read without punctuation marks and paragraphs. Will put this story on the back burner until you re-edit or get someone to proofread!
JaleyaGlenn JaleyaGlenn Jul 09
Well um u made everything one paragraph also there is no quotation marks so I couldn't get into it
habeambolar habeambolar Apr 08
Avoid writing in short form and use punctuation marks where necessary.
TiaJenn TiaJenn Jul 30, 2016
Sounded amazing but I get confused when all mixed together with not enough paragraphs or not using " "
diluchi diluchi Aug 05, 2016
Sounded really good but put quotations so we can know when they are talking
Love0041 Love0041 Apr 03, 2016
Its very confusing when u dont put " " in and u need more space for the sentences