The vampire king is my mate.

The vampire king is my mate.

15.7K Reads 491 Votes 7 Part Story
joibrazille By joibrazille Updated Jan 23

Katie Johnson thought she had it all that was until she met Damien drake the king of all vampires.
Follow me and see what happens next.

TiaJenn TiaJenn Jul 30
Sounded amazing but I get confused when all mixed together with not enough paragraphs or not using " "
diluchi diluchi Aug 05
Sounded really good but put quotations so we can know when they are talking
Love0041 Love0041 Apr 03
Its very confusing when u dont put " " in and u need more space for the sentences
amber125401 amber125401 Feb 20
You need to put this " " in the story because you can't tell when they speak
I really like your story so far but you should try spacing it out some and maybe add some " "
caraacy1 caraacy1 Mar 28
Put this please " " so that we can tell if they're speaking already. It's kinda hard to read