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The vampire king is my mate.

The vampire king is my mate.

21.9K Reads 688 Votes 7 Part Story
joibrazille By joibrazille Updated Jan 23, 2016

Katie Johnson thought she had it all that was until she met Damien drake the king of all vampires.
Follow me and see what happens next.

habeambolar habeambolar Apr 08
Avoid writing in short form and use punctuation marks where necessary.
TiaJenn TiaJenn Jul 30, 2016
Sounded amazing but I get confused when all mixed together with not enough paragraphs or not using " "
diluchi diluchi Aug 05, 2016
Sounded really good but put quotations so we can know when they are talking
Love0041 Love0041 Apr 03, 2016
Its very confusing when u dont put " " in and u need more space for the sentences
amber125401 amber125401 Feb 20, 2016
You need to put this " " in the story because you can't tell when they speak
WolfQueen1516 WolfQueen1516 Jul 11, 2016
I really like your story so far but you should try spacing it out some and maybe add some " "