Katie Johnson thought she had it all that was until she met Damien drake the king of all vampires.
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Sounded amazing but I get confused when all mixed together with not enough paragraphs or not using " "
Sounded really good but put quotations so we can know when they are talking
Its very confusing when u dont put " " in and u need more space for the sentences
You need to put this " " in the story because you can't tell when they speak
I really like your story so far but you should try spacing it out some and maybe add some " "
Put this please " " so that we can tell if they're speaking already. It's kinda hard to read