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Falling For My Best Friends Brother

Falling For My Best Friends Brother

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sshaylenee By sshaylenee Completed

It all started when Riley Allister was dared to kiss her best friends ass of an older brother. But soon, she finds herself falling in love- hard.

Story idea credit goes to @admissable because she had this amazing idea and was willing to share it with us wattpad users

cherrystar11 cherrystar11 Jun 25, 2016
Is it her mum at home- that she doesnt want to go to? im confused?
DorianMinor DorianMinor Oct 22, 2016
Yall chill put 2 and 2 together and figure out who she is. It's not rocket science
I call my friends moms Mom too😂 I have my Mexican mom: mama.   My Christian mom: Mama T  and the mom that "apodted" (nut actually) me: Mom.
Deborah_M Deborah_M Nov 07, 2015
*sister's And instead of saying "...but not because it was funny, but..." say "... not because it was funny..." Basically take out the first "but" and also where it says "Since when were we on a first name basis?" use "are" instead of "were"
Deborah_M Deborah_M Nov 07, 2015
You should make it clear who "her" is. And make it clear who exactly is talking.
Deborah_M Deborah_M Nov 07, 2015
Say "...and wrapped myself in a towel" that way people don't get confused