17.4K Reads 442 Votes 9 Part Story
Cathy By kinpachi Updated Oct 15, 2011

Orphaned. Thrice bought.  

Months before the cruel crown prince's coming of age, a girl with a cryptic identity finds herself bound from his own highness' flirtatious and possessive instincts. 

The shackles pulling her, costs more than just a gamble to break. 
Will she risk it? 
Reasons will keep her from running, even self-destructing.

Devon-J-Thomas Devon-J-Thomas Oct 30, 2011
I love the concept and you wrote this quite well. There were only a few typos and mistakes but one noticeble one was the continual shifts in tenses mostlly during the first half. But otjer than that it was a solid prologue. Voted!
ChazzaChazala ChazzaChazala Oct 25, 2011
ahha ;DD Love the dedication thingy! This is good, I like how you started it with "Fate keeps on happening" which makes people want to read on! :')
                              This is very coooolll XD
                              Charlotte xx
x_abbie x_abbie Oct 24, 2011
This is another good start, i really like your description, you have some great ideas!
Flekso Flekso Oct 24, 2011
Off to a strong start! I've added this on my phone to continue with it! =]
blue-eclipse blue-eclipse Oct 23, 2011
you give lots of descriptions. this opening chapter was really good and flowed really well. a great start
kinpachi kinpachi Oct 23, 2011
Woah, I didn't notice that :O thanks for pointing out btw. <3