This is incredible. Seriously amazing. I think Rule Number Three is my favorite.
I like how you weaved in the murderer's personal beliefs into the common sensical rules. It gave me an enjoyable glance into their delusions and warped logic, especially when it comes to a simple but haunting ending.
Good job on this, as always! :)
this kind of reminds me of education for leisure by carol ann duffy, the same creepy/eerie tone. <3
This is absolutely brilliant. Sent chills down my spine by the end, but brilliant nevertheless.