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CheaterCheaterBestfriendEater (Don't Read.It Sucks)

CheaterCheaterBestfriendEater (Don't Read.It Sucks)

2.2K Reads 51 Votes 9 Part Story
ChrisTeenUh By Awesomenss Updated Apr 03, 2011

Stacy's boyfriend, Spencer slept with Stacy's best friend, Marissa. In return, Stacy broke up Marissa and her boyfriend, Jamal. When she returns home she has a guest whom she doesnt recognise.

ScandalousWithAD ScandalousWithAD May 03, 2011
I LOVE love all yr it keep going...voted n fanned
JewelsUniqueWriting JewelsUniqueWriting Apr 29, 2011
Wow her best friend stabbed her in the back. Hurtful. But very good story, I'm enjoying reading this:) I voted and fanned ! 
LittleAmy LittleAmy Apr 17, 2011
I can't really say anything that hasn't already been said. Great idea, but could do with more description and explanation.
ColorfulQuirks ColorfulQuirks Apr 16, 2011
A little more description and dialog would be good. I can see why you put the title like that (am I the only one? Lol) and I love NeverShoutNever. Anyway, back to topic. This story has a ton of potential if you put a bit more work into it. So, nice job. (:
Bloodynewmoon Bloodynewmoon Apr 16, 2011
A few mistakes, but very good. Remember: Punctuation should be inside the quote, not outside.
                              "Get the hell house of my damn house," Stacy said firmly. <- Example
TheSnowborn TheSnowborn Apr 16, 2011
I feel like that it was short and moved way to fast for it's own good. However it was a good start and I feel it has potential. Plus maybe space the title out? It looks to clumped up.