Stacy's boyfriend, Spencer slept with Stacy's best friend, Marissa. In return, Stacy broke up Marissa and her boyfriend, Jamal. When she returns home she has a guest whom she doesnt recognise.
I LOVE love all yr dialgoue...so intricate.....love it keep going...voted n fanned
Wow her best friend stabbed her in the back. Hurtful. But very good story, I'm enjoying reading this:) I voted and fanned !
I can't really say anything that hasn't already been said. Great idea, but could do with more description and explanation.
A little more description and dialog would be good. I can see why you put the title like that (am I the only one? Lol) and I love NeverShoutNever. Anyway, back to topic. This story has a ton of potential if you put a bit more work into it. So, nice job. (:
A few mistakes, but very good. Remember: Punctuation should be inside the quote, not outside.
"Get the hell house of my damn house," Stacy said firmly. <- Example
I feel like that it was short and moved way to fast for it's own good. However it was a good start and I feel it has potential. Plus maybe space the title out? It looks to clumped up.