Hey guys! This is my first wattpad story so don't expect the best, I'm 16 and SUCK at creative writing
your detailing is pretty on point. however I suggest a better flow of events you don't want your story ending to quickly or else you lose your readers interest. other than that it's a very good story plot.
Oh my god that's scary. Also just an author tip, might need to edit just a bit. :) Still good though! Love where this is going