Experiments

Experiments

80.4K Reads 5K Votes 36 Part Story
Twila Foster By TwilaFoster Updated May 22

Belle was a completely normal girl. 
Until the day she got kidnapped. 
She wakes up in a hospital...if you can call it that. 
There are ten girls, including Belle.
Each of the other girls has had non consensual body modifications,
And Belle is next.

WHERE ARE THE PARAGRAPHS!? I SEE STORIES LIKE THESE WITH 2.9 K VIEWS, WITH SHITTY GRAMMAR. THEN I SEE EXCELLENT STORIES WITH 30 VIEWS, WITH ORIGINAL CHARACTERS AND GOOD GRAMMAR.
                              
                              THIS HAS 2.9 K VIEWS, WHEN MY FAVORITE AUTHOR @Vanillama_ HAS 19 FOLLOWERS.
Nice prologue! I know how hard it can be to make a prologue interesting.
The last 4 stories I've read the main characters name has been Eve…this is getting creepy…
JakePenny JakePenny Aug 25
To be mean to the make but their is a story pretty similar to this I think it's a little better but read both you can decide yourself it's called experiment without a S so the names are basically the same
How interesting! I get the surgery, I don't see anything wrong with it, but that guy was obviously insane and I don't approve of the kidnapping and creepily forced name change... Very well written!