Prince, Alpha, Mate

Prince, Alpha, Mate

29.7K Reads 1.4K Votes 15 Part Story
PianoDart By pianodart Updated Jan 14

When the alarm begins to blare out of the speaker system in the palace, Lauren's room is flooded with guards. This can only mean one thing... an enemy attack. The two werewolf kingdoms have been at war for 20 years; neither side shows intentions of surrendering to the other. But when an interesting turn of events occurs, will the war be forced to come to an end? Only fate can decide.

bunny1692 bunny1692 Sep 14, 2015
Aaaahhhhh. Shame. I wouldn't like being crushed before going unconscious by two bodies. Poor girl
bunny1692 bunny1692 Sep 14, 2015
Don't worry. I know exactly how you feel. I have a book I'm busy with, but haven't updated for months cause I'm trying to figure out how to word the next chapter :)
bunny1692 bunny1692 Sep 14, 2015
Don't worry about it being bad cause it wasn't bad at all. It has me on the edge of my seat right now. That was awesome :p
XhollyryanX XhollyryanX Aug 21, 2015
hot damn. I would just suggest making the sections longer? I mean, no doubt that they are awesome, and I mean of course you would have more short rather than less long sections, but some people get deterred from very short chapters.
                              
                              not me though!
                              
                              I flipperin love this!
XhollyryanX XhollyryanX Aug 21, 2015
OK, damn girl even that description has got me hooked. And I'm being completely honest here like DANNNGGGG GURL
- - Aug 07, 2015
Maybe space it out a bit more. Like with the sentence 'My guards.' and make that a new chapter but make it so that it goes like this;
                              
                              "...male bodies.
                              
                              My guards.
                              
                              They formed..."