Drain Me

Drain Me

11.5K Reads 234 Votes 13 Part Story
Azaria By XxJakaykayMakayayxX Updated Oct 13, 2012

Late night jogs have never been this exciting. Corinne finds herself being kidnapped by two vampires, but I thought vampire didn't exist? Well then explain her sudden capture. Now she's forced to live with a family of vampires. But life doesn't seem to be that bad for her after all, but she soon finds herself falling for a guy that she doesn't want to love but can't help loving, and he seems to be falling fo her also. But there is someone else who seems to be entering the picture and creating a few problems for them both. Corinne doesn't know if she'll see her family ever again. Will she be lost in the world of vampires and soon become one of them? Or will she find a way out and never speak of it again

  • beautiful
  • beauty
  • bite
  • blood
  • drain
  • drained
  • family
  • love
  • problems
  • romance
  • scared
  • teen
  • threatening
  • vampire
  • vampires
SnowDiamante SnowDiamante Dec 23, 2013
Continuity is great. You're a really good author, keep going pls omg ;')
thequeengill thequeengill Aug 20, 2011
LOL. "Why do I feel as though my life has been one big lie?"
percussionluvr percussionluvr Jul 16, 2011
Great bginning, I really liek your details, I was intrigued even though I'm not a ampire person. good job!
XxJakaykayMakayayxX XxJakaykayMakayayxX Jul 16, 2011
thanks for the feed back and @T-Racer yes I would love an editor! :) 
bloopitty bloopitty Jul 16, 2011
I like the humor that you added, but parts of it show the inexpirienced writer. It could be good, but keep practicing and you will get better