the vampires baby(#wattys2015)

the vampires baby(#wattys2015)

196K Reads 3.7K Votes 24 Part Story
Joanna Harris By JoannaHarris7 Updated Feb 21

in a world where humans are sent to slave centers and trained to be babies pets, or even slaves lives a girl named lily . 
nick decides its time that he gets a babygirl.
WARNING. this story is super short
sequel coming in January most likely!!

RainaArellano RainaArellano 3 days ago
It's a bit wierd tho. I meant really wierd✌✌✌ no offense
Jodykay34 Jodykay34 Aug 03
I think I would have died that is being young and Malia in for a 17 year old
GothicLivHeart101 GothicLivHeart101 Aug 28, 2015
....can I just say....... so far........ I wanna be like this lol, I miss being a baby..... I didn't have to do anything
JoannaHarris7 JoannaHarris7 Aug 23, 2015
i its okay this is unedited i havent had the time to edit it
InSearchOfFlames InSearchOfFlames Aug 23, 2015
I really like the idea of this story, but the grammar isn't so good and it's hard to understand with so many spelling mistakes. I'm not judging you, this is simply constructive criticism.
jayjay133 jayjay133 Jul 19, 2015
Please try to edit your spelling,paragraph spacing, and some letters need to be capitalized at the beginning. But overall the plot seems fine