Broken Lies

Broken Lies

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Mary By DarkEmoqueen Updated Sep 04, 2010

This is a poem of how i feel about my ex and his stupid lies. Not telling the truth. He wouldnt look me in the eye and say he loved me and he wouldnt say sorry if i didnt say something....... LIKe IT PLZ TELL ME 

DarkEmoqueen DarkEmoqueen Sep 10, 2010
Thanks very much ......... I know its selfish to write about what has happen to me but hey thats all i could think of now im working on like making it as if its some one eles :D
JustKaylay JustKaylay Sep 10, 2010
I really like this:) Poetry is probably my favorite thing to read/write, although i don't post my poems, they're really personal to me. So i have to give you props for posting something that shows your feelings=]
PlumBlossoms PlumBlossoms Sep 07, 2010
Almost every line ended with "Lie" or "Cry" ...
                              It was okay, but I wish you used a bigger word selection then those two words.