Frayed (Formerly Known As The Sweetest Sorrows of Ava Hale)

Frayed (Formerly Known As The Sweetest Sorrows of Ava Hale)

23 Part Story 160K Reads 5.9K Votes
Kara By Kara_writes Completed

Available from Sourcebooks Fire in June 7th 2016!
    
    [Sourcebooks Story Development Prize Winner!]
    
    Dear Kesley, My therapist tells me I should write you a letter. Like flushing all my thoughts and feelings out of my system and onto paper. I tell her it's a stupid idea. But here I am, writing a letter to a dead girl. Where do I start? Where did our story begin? From the moment you were born...or died? I'll start with the moment I found out the truth about you. Your lies and my pain. Because it always begins and ends with you. And that end began when Rafe Lawrence came back to town...
    
    Ava Hale will do anything to find her sister's killer...although she'll wish she hadn't. Because the harder Ava looks, the more secrets she uncovers about Kesley, and the more she begins to think that the girl she called sister was a liar. A sneak. A stranger. And Kesley's murderer could be much closer than she thought...
    
    A debut novel from Wattpad award-winner Kara Terzis, Frayed is a psychological whodunit that will keep you guessing!

sidityfitty sidityfitty Jan 31, 2015 07:20AM
I like this story already. Intrigued. This makes me put my story Emily Saves Me to shame lol.
Fantasy_girl21 Fantasy_girl21 Dec 07, 2014 06:18AM
So good already! I literally only saw two errors, and it was simple word repetition in a sentence. Great start
Vidsammy Vidsammy Oct 07, 2014 06:46AM
Brilliant Introduction of the story!
                                    
                                    Love the exposition of the characters' personality and plot diagram.
strwberryhemmo strwberryhemmo Sep 01, 2014 01:50AM
I love how you write, really nice chapter!
                                    
                                    When Lia said she ran into someone at the Cafe, I thought she literally ran someone over with her car, oops?
This beginning is very intriguing and gives a great background into the story. I enjoy the voice of Ava, and how she slowly realizes that this could help. Nice job.
awwthentic awwthentic Aug 11, 2014 06:58PM
Perfectly crafted start. I like the concept of starting with a quote that matches the storyline. I had been doing the same with mine. But talking about your story, it looks interesting. I like your writing style a lot. :)