A Love Unveiled

A Love Unveiled

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Emmy Alexander By inkzerospace Completed

To many he is known as Fallon ‘The Fury’ for he is relentless and formidable, known for his prowess in battle and golden appearance, he is feared as well as admired by those around him but during the rise of William the Conqueror, he is ambushed and left for dead. When he awakes, he finds himself in the hands of his enemy and irresistibly drawn to the red-haired beauty that tends his wounds. 

When Alana McKenna encounters a beaten, unconscious man, unmistakably handsome and undoubtedly dangerous, her instincts warn her to leave the man for dead, unaware that he is the infamous Fallon ‘The Fury’ but her compassionate nature and healer roots cannot abide leaving a man, including her enemy to die. 

Fallon finds himself tormented with dreams of the fiery beauty that restored him to life and will stop at nothing to find her and make her his, but there are others who wish him dead and desire his prize. Will the uncertainty of precarious dangers threaten their lives and destroy their love?

I think it would be "nickered" not "snickered". Snickered is more of a human thing. And horses don't snicker uneasily. They nicker uneasily. Otherwise great description. :)
ananya008 ananya008 Oct 31, 2016
Omg!I'm gonna love this story.I feel it.this is what I've been looking for quite sometime now.great work,author!
moonblossom moonblossom Mar 16, 2016
I'm going to name your stars okay?
                              
                              I hereby dub these Alissa, Alex, Ariana, Alexia, Andrew, Andre, Alicia, Amicus, Adonis, and Athena
fruitcup8 fruitcup8 Aug 04, 2015
I love heroines who are brave and do what they want no matter who gets in there way! Bravo!
LizMack LizMack Jun 05, 2015
You have a very detailed, and descriptive writing ability. Your sentences flow and your diction is superb. The only critiques I can give is that some sentences are run ons and some words are misspelled. Great job!
- - Mar 04, 2015
Your stories are always amazing. I have high hopes for this one.