Published: January 2016
This is a story about Liam and Zayn;
How they live;
how they laugh;
how they regret;
how they miss opportunities;
how they tackle life;
I thought zayn met Louis for the first time at the carnival when harry introduced them???
I love how this is pretty much my life story 😂 The boy I like is exactly like Liam and I'm Zayn lol
Im with paviya_blue. The beginning didnt really call out to me as a reader and I found a few grammar errors. I think you should edit it and pay more attentiom to details. Sorry if I sound mean. I know beginnings might be hard to write sometimes
Eh it's a bit bright for Zayn. I imagine Troye Sivan wearing this.
I'm going to agree with paviya_blue on this one. This definitely needs to keep edited to have more of a professional work to it. I honestly don't know why everyone keeps writing ziam fanfictions. I don't understand this yaoi couple.
Just finished reading Twist in my Story in like a day! So looking forward to this!!