Fifty Shades of Family

Fifty Shades of Family

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High Queen Nikkayyy By NikkiD312 Updated Jan 21

Christian and Ana have married and two beautiful children, Theo and Pheobe. They spend their days together, either with or without the kids. But what happens if something....unexpected happens and they don't know what to do

Aastha516 Aastha516 Apr 21, 2016
There are spaces where you used miss instead of mrs. So could you please change that because in the trilogy Christian always referred ana as mrs. Grey. 
                              Btw great going so far.  
                              Congratulations!!!
sbearit sbearit Aug 12, 2015
This is very good so far!   I am a little thrown off, though, by you referring to their son as Theo.   They address him by his full name of Theodore or Ted or Teddy, or Teddy Bear, but never Theo!   The name feels a bit foreign to me.