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Sonia By scrivener19 Updated Aug 20, 2011

Cynthia Becker is strong-minded woman that refuses to back down under any circumstances. 
She is a journalist by profession and is a self-confessed adrenaline junkie. As a journalist, she uncovers a shocking story about Neil, a Senators son. She doesnt know what to do next? Should she expose the story or use it to her advantage? 
In the mean time, Neil figures out that she is after him and sends people to keep her under control.

HopeJohn HopeJohn Aug 21, 2011
I did not think your Chapter was short by any means. Sometimes for people with short attention spans. *coughs embarrased* Its always good to keep it short and simple, in my book the longest chapter is 3 pages.
MunchieMonster MunchieMonster Aug 21, 2011
Not my favourite genres, but this was written pretty well and I enjoyed reading it...
XxTiCkLe-xX XxTiCkLe-xX Aug 21, 2011
I think this is a great start to the story. Answering you question at the end, yes it was short but as it was the introduction it was fine :) Love it !! *voted*
SMILEY99552 SMILEY99552 Aug 21, 2011
I think that was a great start and I enjoyed reading in a lot! Off to read the next chapter now!
scrivener19 scrivener19 Aug 08, 2011
@answerthecall : Hmm okay! My english teacher told me to do that it an grammatical thing or do most people just prefer it that way!
scrivener19 scrivener19 Jul 29, 2011
@tlm2338 : thanks a lot for ur insightful comments! They really help me out!