Of the Sea

Of the Sea

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NicoleEvette By NicoleEvette Completed

The ocean was an unforgiving force that took as it pleased and gave little back. Astrid knew that to be a fact. After the tragedy of her mother's death, she watched her father's sanity collapse as he was driven to prove that it was more than just a boating accident. Unlike him, she stayed well away from the water's edge and out of its grasp, immersed in the sorrow of her loss. But what little the ocean did give back, a man of myth with the tail of a fish, could reveal more about the secrets to a harrowing conspiracy brewing below the surface.

Thanks for the feedback! The story is currently under edit...this is a rough ROUGH draft. Most of what you pointed out comes in later chapters for a reason, but I appreciate the feedback 😊 It's always very helpful.
Aww makes me feel bad for the fish all around the world getting captured. 😢 Poor fishys!! 😭😭
dejalou dejalou Jan 11
This story has satisfied my need for well written Mermaid/Merman books.
dejalou dejalou Jan 11
This story has satisfied my need for well written Mermaid/Merman books.
TayLeeLah TayLeeLah Nov 24, 2015
Omg I had a Newfoundland!!! He died about a month ago. Such beautiful dogs
NicoleEvette NicoleEvette Aug 15, 2015
Agreed. It's no fun writing a perfect character, human or not. I got tired of seeing all of those wasted opportunities  to create a dynamic character. Glad you enjoy :)