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Of the Sea

Of the Sea

69.2K Reads 4.7K Votes 19 Part Story
NicoleEvette By NicoleEvette Completed

The ocean was an unforgiving force that took as it pleased and gave little back. Astrid knew that to be a fact. After the tragedy of her mother's death, she watched her father's sanity collapse as he was driven to prove that it was more than just a boating accident. Unlike him, she stayed well away from the water's edge and out of its grasp, immersed in the sorrow of her loss. But what little the ocean did give back, a man of myth with the tail of a fish, could reveal more about the secrets to a harrowing conspiracy brewing below the surface.

btw i looove that there's a merman in this story! i'm kind of sick of always mermaids this and mermaids that.
fishboyke fishboyke May 25
This story is AMAZING!!!! I wrote a story kind of like this but it focuses more on the actual mermaids and the different species trying to defeat dark magic. Go check it out at The Pacifican Rising. Thanks
U cant ride in my little red wagon...... anyone? Just me? Okay.
I think a fluke is the two fins on a mermaid tail. It is responsible for moving a mermaid forward
NicoleEvette NicoleEvette Oct 21, 2016
Thanks for the feedback! The story is currently under edit...this is a rough ROUGH draft. Most of what you pointed out comes in later chapters for a reason, but I appreciate the feedback 😊 It's always very helpful.
Beautiful_Starz Beautiful_Starz Feb 21, 2016
Aww makes me feel bad for the fish all around the world getting captured. 😢 Poor fishys!! 😭😭