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50 shades of Dallas

50 shades of Dallas

14.5K Reads 183 Votes 6 Part Story
Irwinsbean By AshleyChristine28 Updated Dec 13, 2015

Violet Harmon just graduated from college and wanted to start a more permanent job. She wants to become the assistant for Mr. Dallas but she would have to have an interview with him. and would have to work very hard to get the job. The thing is she is sort of a badass so will she even get this job?

This stories really good although i would like to give you a little pointer, maybe think of other ways to explain whos saying the dialogue and how there saying it in stead of using he said she said all the time for exaple you could say he retorted in an uneasy tone of voice