Alpha's Possessive Mate !

Alpha's Possessive Mate !

16 Part Story 65.4K Reads 839 Votes
Jay Figueroa By ProudMomme Updated Feb 07

!!!!!!!!WARNING!!!!!!!! This Book Is Rated R. Strong Sexual Content. 18 Yrs &' Older  Preferred

CandiceH27 CandiceH27 Oct 12, 2014 12:02PM
Nice first chapter... Really draws u in.. I feel emotional connected to the characters already
ProudMomme ProudMomme Jul 23, 2014 10:39PM
@Veronica1Luv They Blocked Her Out The Mind Link So She Didn't Know Exactly What He Did It Could Be Anything Really Her Father Wasn't Known For That By Others So It Wasn't A Thought. We Know Cuz Rose Explained It
ur dad cheated.... -.- whats so confusing about that? u just heard it... Im pretty sure ur smart and old enough to put the puzzle pieces together.... -.-
Sorry too late... forgetted happened.......... *is that even a word?!?* Who are u again?
teardropsriver teardropsriver Apr 25, 2014 06:17AM
The story is interesting. I'll follow and read it. 
                                    
                                    My first advice would be to make the paragraphs a bit smaller, it would be easyer to read and separate the dialogue. You have two people speaking in the same paragraph and that is confusing for the readers.
ProudMomme ProudMomme Mar 16, 2013 06:17PM
@Rose_Hawthorn
                                     @soccer195
                                    
                                    For Some Reason Guys You Have To Follow me In Order To Read It So You Could Fan To Read And Unfan When your done