Alpha's Possessive Mate !

Alpha's Possessive Mate !

75.5K Reads 931 Votes 16 Part Story
Jay Figueroa By ProudMomme Updated Feb 07

!!!!!!!!WARNING!!!!!!!! This Book Is Rated R. Strong Sexual Content. 18 Yrs &' Older  Preferred

ShatterMe97 ShatterMe97 Jul 05
Don't believe that business trip lie until you start seeing business trip checks coming in
CandiceH27 CandiceH27 Oct 12, 2014
Nice first chapter... Really draws u in.. I feel emotional connected to the characters already
ProudMomme ProudMomme Jul 23, 2014
@Veronica1Luv They Blocked Her Out The Mind Link So She Didn't Know Exactly What He Did It Could Be Anything Really Her Father Wasn't Known For That By Others So It Wasn't A Thought. We Know Cuz Rose Explained It
xoxRed_Rosexox xoxRed_Rosexox Jul 23, 2014
ur dad cheated.... -.- whats so confusing about that? u just heard it... Im pretty sure ur smart and old enough to put the puzzle pieces together.... -.-
xoxRed_Rosexox xoxRed_Rosexox Jul 23, 2014
Sorry too late... forgetted happened.......... *is that even a word?!?* Who are u again?
teardropsriver teardropsriver Apr 25, 2014
The story is interesting. I'll follow and read it. 
                              
                              My first advice would be to make the paragraphs a bit smaller, it would be easyer to read and separate the dialogue. You have two people speaking in the same paragraph and that is confusing for the readers.