"Rock the Cradle"

"Rock the Cradle"

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F. J. Hansen By fjhansen Completed

The UES Discovery, under Captain Jonathan March, is pulled into a region of space in which a dozen ships have disappeared over the previous century. Thrown nearly 400 million years in the past, they, along with another Earth ship, become the only ones who can prevent the destruction of Mankind's future cradle.

maxd01 maxd01 May 01
And that is why even space ships need seat belts and restraints...  :P
kasross kasross May 03
Cool; a "white hole" to take us from one galaxy to another... as long as they can get back the same way.
faithfulnarrator faithfulnarrator Jun 04, 2015
Interesting! Some of the sentences run on a little and I'd work on making us attached to some of the characters, but your descriptions and dialogue are on point.