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The Quiet One

The Quiet One

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~SBB~ By Snowbluebird Updated Dec 14, 2017

You know that kid in class, the one with the quiet voice and good grades? Well in Halanton High School that's exactly what Dawn Berne is. She has always kept up this good girl image in school. That is until she ran into a wall with freckles and green eyes.
This wall happens to be Jack. Jack is the type of person Dawn always avoids. He's rebellious, confident and dangerous. And now he's everywhere she turns from school, to her house.  She wants him gone before something happens and is willing to do just about anything to do that.
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- - Jun 08, 2016
I like this opening! It's relatable, stereotypical, and straight to the point. 
                              Also, check out my two stories Finding Me and The Time I Saved Oz!
jrod567 jrod567 Jun 04, 2016
Aw I thought it was sweet when the wall said "Oh my god!" 😊