Stuck in the Happiest Place on Earth

Stuck in the Happiest Place on Earth

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Disneyland<3 By Disneyfanaticforever Updated Aug 26, 2017

Two teens at the age of 14 get stuck in the happiest place on Earth, Disneyland.
  
 They both know the park inside out but when they get stuck  in together due to some weird circumstances  things start to happen.
  
  Everything they ever knew changes as the park's rides seem to come to life with no one but them there.
  
  They must complete a challenging task, deal with unbelievable risks and in the end get out alive, all with a person they've never met before!!!


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NotASimpleReader NotASimpleReader Jul 15, 2015
So far it's really intriguing, you are just missing a 's when you say ...Skylar hair around as..., (Skylar's hair) It's really nice :3 I have went to Disney once and it was really incredible so I'm really interested about your story :)
SwatiHegde SwatiHegde Jul 15, 2015
This is an intriguing start. Your descriptions are on point, and I really felt like I was in Disney World, even though I've never been there. But the ending cliffhanger was a little rushed. See if you can pace it out a little bit more. :)
SwatiHegde SwatiHegde Jul 15, 2015
The description of his clothing doesn't go well with this action. Separate them.
Rureal Rureal Jul 13, 2015
I can relate to this cause last week I went to Disney world and it was amazing. I haven't been to Disney land I live in Florida so yeah... At first I thought Thai would be some book about what rides they went but I loved the twist. It was very interesting!
xoxocookiegirlxoxo xoxocookiegirlxoxo Jul 13, 2015
Reminds me of childhood, how I wished to go to disney land :D  I think an adventure is about to start for skyler and andrew. Overall nice beginning.
LestrangeMare LestrangeMare Jun 20, 2015
I like this story I relate to both characters except I've never been to Disneyland I live in Florida so I go to Disney world