the player (kid Lucas  love story

the player (kid Lucas love story

17.3K Reads 490 Votes 11 Part Story
Takayla Richmond By kaylacool02 Completed

This about an girl an a boy

This is kinda a rip off of john tucker must die😡😡😭😭😅😅
Can you put periods in each sentence, separate the sentences into paragraphs so we know who talking and put quotation marks,plz,because I can't read this without getting lost and trying to figure out who's talking? Didn't u learn this in school?
I dont know who talking and when they stop talking but besides that..."Cant play hide and seek with her cause she'll get lost" that had me rolling...💋💖😒🔫
Atx_Isha Atx_Isha May 11
Can we put some grammar in here? It's hard to read without punctuation
StellaOtseMawandza StellaOtseMawandza Dec 10, 2015
Lmaoo she not a thot yall sje just dated almist the ejole school....✋✋🐸🍵🍵☕☕