With the Gang Leader

With the Gang Leader

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Shelly By Yellow2Red Completed

She was beautiful, smart, quiet, intelligent, creative and generous. She was everything her father not expected her to be. Being the daughter of a gang leader, she should have been the ruthless bad girl but she turned out to be the exact opposite.
  
  He, on the other end, had everything of a gang leader's vibe. He was a bad boy with killer looks and had almost every girl smitten over him. He was ruthless, nonchalant, rude and incapable of love for everyone but her. At least, that was how the world saw him.
  
  They met. They talked. They fought. They cared. But did they fall in love? 
  
  Read this story of Rayne Munroe and Alec Warner to find out...
  **Completed**
  ==Note: This book is riddled with grammatical errors and needs major editing. I'll do it ASAP ==Read at your own risk because my English has improved now. A lot. 
  "DO READ THE MORAL OF THE STORY"

But he said don't come home before 8 pm so i don't get his anger
Hmmm.. I love reading this kinds of books hahaha cliché my daughter is in deed a daughter of a gang leader. 😂 I laugh at this. My husband was a founder of a fraternity back then.  we met he was really nice.
The boy's first name sucks. I hate a guy I personally know who has the same name and attitude as him😡
You might want to change "bolted her legs" to just "bolted". Normally, when someone "bolts" their legs, they stay in one place-it's an exaggeration. When someone "bolts" to someplace, they went there quickly. I hope this helps-I like the story so far!!!^^
I can't this girl is my sisters name spelled e same way 2 she's 11 I can't read this and our last name is Warner too this is too much😭😭😂😂😂😳
We met when they already dissolved the group and has a working job doing furniture and stuff.