Lost Secrets ( One Direction)

Lost Secrets ( One Direction)

1K Reads 33 Votes 9 Part Story
crystal By crystaful12 Updated Jan 05, 2015

One night Caroline a 17 year girl, was woken up to her parents being murderd. With the help of a secret agents,they help her escape to saftey.But now she lives in fear that they will get her.while trying to decide if she should go into hiding or help does who helped her.

  • harry
  • horan
  • liam
  • louis
  • malik
  • niall
  • onedirection
  • payne
  • spys
  • styles
  • tomlinson
  • zayn
MrsHarryStyles121 MrsHarryStyles121 Mar 19, 2013
There where letters that needed to be capitalise like for example. 
                              i should turn into 'I' And space out your paragraph so we could see it clearly. It's cute, you got my vote.
xXhopelessromanticXx xXhopelessromanticXx Mar 11, 2013
Ahh the capitalization error threw me off a little >< otherwise this is really cute :)
xXhopelessromanticXx xXhopelessromanticXx Mar 11, 2013
Not a fan of One Direction but this sounds interesting, will read on :)
thedanierenee thedanierenee Mar 11, 2013
hehehe my name is Danielle, but I hate 1D... sorry! You have a lot of things that need to be caps. Also, give more detail about what's going on! Maybe find an editor. I could do it for this chapter, but I'd need a shout out and dedication, if you want.
GreenNeonZebra GreenNeonZebra Feb 26, 2013
Short but a good way to start a story. Just double check on the capitalization and your all good!
- - Feb 23, 2013
Its good tho its short, basically a great way to kick start your story! Xx