Smutty goodness c;
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OH MY GOSH!! This sounds so bad like so much torture omg I feel so bad for Louis rn lmaoo 😟😂😂
It was a good plot and I liked that you added some jealousy in it. Try to think of who's perspective you're writing in though. It was a little hard to follow sometimes, but it's just something to work on. Are you planning on writing more stories?