The Alpha's Son (Completed But going through major editing!!!)

The Alpha's Son (Completed But going through major editing!!!)

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Rachael By VampRachxxx Completed

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As soon as our eyes connected i knew who he was, he was my mate.
"Mate, mate, mate we found him!!" my wolf was shouting with joy.
He got up and walked to me, took my hand and pulled me up.
He guided me upstairs to him room, never letting his eyes leave mine.
As soon as we were in and the door was closed he pulled me into a loving hug.
"I found you... mine" he whispered in my ear. Hi voice very sexy and seductive.
"Yours..." i whispered back and he pulled back to look at me, his eyes golden.
"I need to mark you, before anyone else can" He said was authority in his voice

Queeky007 Queeky007 Apr 05, 2015
I feel like this would be so awkward. 
                              "Hey, I just bit your daughter and..."
                              I know, I know, they're werewolves but still, lol.
green45123 green45123 Jun 29, 2013
it's really good! but there are some spelling mistakes that might need some fixing but I really do love the story!!!!!<33333
MrsAnaTomlinson MrsAnaTomlinson May 19, 2013
I@VampRachxxx it's a good story I really enjoyed it, it had a awesome plot I just thought it was a bit rushed but its a good book :)
VampRachxxx VampRachxxx May 19, 2013
@MrsAnaTomlinson 
                              
                              It was my first book, i was exited and in a rush to get it done, so sorry if you feel that way about it.
MrsAnaTomlinson MrsAnaTomlinson May 19, 2013
The story is great but it's moving too fast she is already comfortable with Logan