Destroyed Mate

Destroyed Mate

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Krcupcake By Krcupcake Completed

ranked 223 in werewolf

"Lillian Ann Woods!" my father yelled," Get your scrawny ass out here and make me my breakfast!" As if I could call him my father. He's the alpha of my pack of I guess you say torturers. My mom was human and was his mate. But sadly as soon as I came into this world she left. Taking any compassion my dad once had with her. 

Now I live in the basement of the pack house and do everyone's chores. Sounds wonderful right? 

Life is just... Peachy I guess.

I groaned and rolled out of bed. "Coming sir." 
Please this is my first story on here. Tell me what you think. I will listen to anything you guys have to say. I am open minded when it comes to criticism.

847 ranking in werewolf

  • abuse
  • abused
  • alpha
  • broken
  • halfwolf
  • luna
  • mate
  • werewolf
  • wolf
My only thought reading this is that the title of the chapter might be too revealing.
                               Chapter titles are to make you wonder what is going on, not tell you in my experience.  
                              Sorry if that came out rude
.....your a wolf to....basically a dog so aren't you a mutt???
lenee_keira lenee_keira Jul 26
Shattering.her.ankle..😬😬 oml, I bet that hurt like a BITCH
Actually her nick name would be Lilly with two lls because her full name is Lillian. Lily is another name. Sorry I'm a nerd
PapiChubi PapiChubi Jan 22
Yeah and on the way I'll throw Jesus at u telling him to kill ur ugly ays
flossydoodlecay2003 flossydoodlecay2003 Dec 16, 2016
Well, well, well, another spot in *clipboard Appears out of thin air* *starts writing on it* oh, here we go an open spot.
                              -Alex's demon side