Among The Plastics

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Clover By Cloverism Updated a year ago
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It's really good:) its kinda short, tho. But that's all about personal preference. What I try to do is to make sure each chapter is at least 2000 words. It's about 2 1/5 pages:) and my only other critique is to pay some attention to feelings, like emotions and the 5 senses besides touch and sight:) 
                                    Other than that good job:)
                                    P.S.  don't forget to read and comment on mine:) thx
It's really good:) its kinda short, tho. But that's all about personal preference. What I try to do is to make sure each chapter is at least 2000 words. It's about 2 1/5 pages:) and my only other critique is to pay some attention to feelings, like emotions and the 5 senses besides touch and sight:) 
                                    Other than that good job:)
                                    P.S.  don't forget to read and comment on mine:) thx
It's really good:) its kinda short, tho. But that's all about personal preference. What I try to do is to make sure each chapter is at least 2000 words. It's about 2 1/5 pages:) and my only other critique is to pay some attention to feelings, like emotions and the 5 senses besides touch and sight:) 
                                    Other than that good job:)
                                    P.S.  don't forget to read and comment on mine:) thx
It's really good:) its kinda short, tho. But that's all about personal preference. What I try to do is to make sure each chapter is at least 2000 words. It's about 2 1/5 pages:) and my only other critique is to pay some attention to feelings, like emotions and the 5 senses besides touch and sight:) 
                                    Other than that good job:)
                                    P.S.  don't forget to read and comment on mine:) thx
It's really good:) its kinda short, tho. But that's all about personal preference. What I try to do is to make sure each chapter is at least 2000 words. It's about 2 1/5 pages:) and my only other critique is to pay some attention to feelings, like emotions and the 5 senses besides touch and sight:) 
                                    Other than that good job:)
                                    P.S.  don't forget to read and comment on mine:) thx
It's really good:) its kinda short, tho. But that's all about personal preference. What I try to do is to make sure each chapter is at least 2000 words. It's about 2 1/5 pages:) and my only other critique is to pay some attention to feelings, like emotions and the 5 senses besides touch and sight:) 
                                    Other than that good job:)
                                    P.S.  don't forget to read and comment on mine:) thx