Among The Plastics | Hiatus

Among The Plastics | Hiatus

7K Reads 168 Votes 1 Part Story
Clover M. Langley By Cloverism Updated Apr 03

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So far so good and I'm enjoying it you have brought charatures to live
RoderickYoung RoderickYoung May 29, 2014
The dialogue is wonderful, and brings this story to life.  Nice cliffhanger of an intro.
                              
                              The first few paragraphs sound a bit shaky if you were trying to create an omniscient narrator.  Might be good to ask another writer to give that part a once-over.
nyc94s nyc94s Apr 30, 2013
It was areally cool story.i dont know how come all of you can create all these amazing stories
Cloverism Cloverism Apr 21, 2013
@truly_classic thanks, this is the non edited version. trust me when i say the edited one has a lot more details :D
emerawr88 emerawr88 Aug 20, 2012
I love the Uglies series!! Omg. Yes. I just started reading this, it looks REALLY good. So yep.
Cloverism Cloverism Jun 08, 2012
@tigerlily1d haha, im working on that ^_^. hopefully this year it'll come true.