Bullied by one direction

Bullied by one direction

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kendradh By kendradh Updated Mar 03, 2016

What happens when a group of five boys bully you? What happens when they get famous? That what star's life is like

  • fanfic
  • sadness
  • stay
  • strong
  • zayn
overtherewithHarry overtherewithHarry Jun 07, 2017
Yea I do agree everything is going quite fast but I mean get everything out of the way, right? XD
I like it but the bullying scenes could use some work, like be more elaborate and while describing her pain use metaphors to make it sound better, also it is going a bit fast
katrinalenore katrinalenore May 19, 2016
You might want to put a space between all the parts of speeches, but other wise its good
djhlegacy djhlegacy Jun 05, 2016
Wait? HOW DID THE TEACHER NOT NOTICE HER BLOODY SHIRT. GEEZ. AND WHERE ARE THE BLOODY SECURITY CAMERAS. AND WHY ISNT SHE CALLING 999 ON HER DAD AND THE PRINCIPAL ON 1D
bnancysuspense bnancysuspense Jan 16, 2016
All your father does is kick  And punch!?. Your life is hard.
beautifulnxghtmare beautifulnxghtmare May 05, 2014
he said my gcse's , not mitisissies. they're the exams we do x