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Captive

Captive

53.8K Reads 1.6K Votes 26 Part Story
Melea Nicole By MeleaLove Updated Jan 17, 2013

The life of a princess isn't all that it is cut out to be. Nineteen year old Sage hates it with the passion. Running errands with her parents, dressing up, prodded and tugged around. But wait, getting caught in a trap and being held captive? Since when was that in the description for a princess?

Natasha_015 Natasha_015 Apr 03, 2016
This first chapter was very exciting I can't wait to read the rest
xZombieChick xZombieChick Nov 15, 2011
Awesome story. Lol, Not as cliche as I thought it would be. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes so that's good :D I'm always making mistakes when I write. o_O, But anyways, great story xD I voted.
MeleaLove MeleaLove Nov 10, 2011
@AnnealiseWengel @The_Black_Butterfly @aashleyybell @smilemedead @Lancelot7777 
                              Thank you so much all of you(: I appreciate the feedback
ImForCoffee ImForCoffee Nov 09, 2011
I loved the first full paragraph, the whole idea of the story is very interesting. Your writing style has a really nice flow to it, my only advice is keep writing!
aashleyybell aashleyybell Nov 09, 2011
This book is very intriguing and keeps me wanting to read more. It is well written, good job! I love it. :)
The_Black_Butterfly The_Black_Butterfly Nov 09, 2011
I like it:) It's well-written. I was expecting something a lot more cliché than this for romance and teen fiction:P