Temptation, Lust and Desire

Temptation, Lust and Desire

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April By Beautifully8broken Updated Jun 05, 2012

The Fallen follows the story of eighteen year old Rose as she struggles to fit in between two worlds, one where her mother left her and the one she belongs to. Soon, she develops a friendship with David that evolves into love But secrets threaten to tear them apart.

Critic_101 Critic_101 Sep 01, 2010
Its good though you don't really need to keep switching from one point of view to another, your story could get a little hectic...Upload soon!