Return to Sender (With Feedback) ON HOLD TILL I'M DONE WITH THE PRESENT LIST
- Reads 953
- Votes 192
- Parts 14
"911, what's your emergency?"
"Hi, I just published my book but... I don't know if it's really that catchy."
"No worries, dearest. Please stay calm. I'm dispatching immediate feedback as we speak. I'll check your hook, your pacing, and whether your characters are guilty of stealing hearts. Kindly drop your title and genre below and I'll be on the case right away."
All Rights Reserved
#348
bookhelp
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
The Chase (Enhypen X Hearts2Hearts au)
They were raised as weapons - seven boys and eight girls forged in the same underground hell, trained to be shadows, tools, killers. When the system burned, they split: ENHYPEN chose the law. Hearts2Hearts chose the underworld. Now, years later, they're on opposite sides of the same war - cops and criminals, brothers and sisters, ghosts chasing each other through bloodstained streets. But this isn't about justice. It's about power. Revenge. And the scars they left on each other. Because in this city, nothing runs deeper than family - except the wounds they gave each other. Let the chase begin. Started: April 20th, 2025. Ended: ? @llowness XXX Disclaimer! This is a work of fiction intended for mature audiences. It contains themes of violence, emotional trauma, sibling rivalry, psychological manipulation, criminal activity, and morally gray characters. Reader discretion is advised. All characters depicted are fictional versions of real-life artists and are not intended to reflect their real personalities, beliefs, or actions. This story is purely for creative and entertainment purposes. Please note: This story also explores sensitive topics including abuse of power, betrayal, emotional neglect, and the lasting scars of broken family dynamics. If any of these themes may be triggering to you, proceed with caution. Respect the artists. Respect the art. Support with love. Number 4 in #catandmouse
Bride of Alvar (Redemption Saga, Book 1)
*completed NOW A PUBLISHED NOVEL!* An ancient Cursed bloodline, a world-crossed romance, tyrant kings, a princess with dragon wings, a forbidden love affair, and a sorcerer meant to reign in chaos... this is the Redemption Saga. Bride of Alvar What if your entire life your mother declared you're destined to wed a king from a magical world? Would you believe her? Probably not. I didn't believe her either, until a handsome, other-worldly king showed up to claim me as his bride. Despite my annoying attraction to him, I let the magical king know about a complication: I'm already engaged to somebody else. However, when monsters from Alvar's world kidnap my best friend, I find myself whisked away to his realm marrying him anyway. But marrying a man I barely know and adapting to a fantastical new world is nothing compared to learning just how many dark secrets my new husband hides and that the fates of both my world and Alvar's rest on MY shoulders. For the edited paperback of this book go to this link: https://www.amazon.com/Bride-Alvar-Redemption-Silver-Reins/dp/B08LNJL4LN Best ranking: #1 in FantasyComplete
The Poisonous Melaina
π‘π€π³π±π πΈπ π« π²π€π±π¨π€π² #1 She pressed the knife deeper to my throat. I could feel the sting and blood beginning to trickle down my neck. "I gave you a chance to leave and never come back, why didn't you take it?" I looked into those deep grey eyes that I fell for. "Because I wouldn't have my wife sitting right next to me on that train ride." I answered truthfully. βοΈβοΈβοΈ He has never met someone as mean as her. The glare on her face almost seemed permanent. The only words that fall out of her mouth are ones that will leave you tarnished and torn, making you second guess where you went wrong. Even worse, she never spoke, more like she grunted responses. When he first laid eyes on her, he fell in love with her tattoos, her attitude, her charm. He didn't understand why he kept coming back? He was intrigued with her. No matter what she said or did to him, he kept coming back. He was impatient but would wait for her. . . . She never understood how someone could keep a smile on their face everyday. The way he always kept a positive look on life. He never frowned. He was the flavour bubblegum that everyone wanted. The go-to ice cream flavour that you always get on a sunny day. That one summer vacation that you'll never forget. She hated his smile, his laugh, his eyes. She hated that she wanted to see that smile everyday. She hated that she couldn't stay away from him. She would happily set the world on fire but never let a flame touch him. βοΈβοΈβοΈ All Rights Reserved 2022βΈsyriacaxComplete
"Her Innocent King "
He never wore a crown, never held a gun... but still, he ruled her world. She was born with blood on her hands and fire in her veins-the mafia princess everyone feared. A girl who could break ribs without breaking a sweat, yet secretly dreamed of fairy tales. And he? He was just a boy with flour-dusted fingers and a heart too pure for her dark world. A gamer. A dreamer. The last person you'd expect to survive her storm. But fate doesn't ask for permission. One forced marriage. One innocent heart trapped in her dangerous empire. One girl who would tear down the underworld to protect the only man who made her feel human. She was raised to be a queen of crime- But for him, she chose to be his princess first... and his protector forever. After all, he wasn't just her husband. He was... Her innocent King. πComplete
The Barbarian's Girl
βπ«ππππππππ ππππ π ππππ ππ πππππππππ π πππππππππππ.- #πππππππππππβ ~ Isabella is working as a maid in a Castle. She became mute after a very hurtful incident. She used to live in a small village, far away from where she is now, with her family. She used to be happy. But everything changed in one night. Her life turned upside down. She had to witness her mother's murder. Also after that night, her father disappeared. She had to run away from her home, only to end up in the Castle. She was alone with no friends. The only thing that she had been wishing was for a miracle to happen, to take her away from her misery. Kennan King is a powerful man. He was known for being ruthless and heartless with everyone, especially the ones who tried to hurt him or his people. He shows no mercy to anyone. He was just a child when his family got murdered. He lived in the streets with no food. He found other kids like him and they united, becoming who they are now. He knew who caused his family's death and he wanted revenge. What he didn't expect though, is to find an innocent and adorable girl, scared for her life. She awakes feeling he didn't even know he would feel in his life and he didn't know if he was scared or not. Can Isabella warm Kennan's, cold heart? Read to find out! ~ This book contains sexual scenes so if you don't like it, you can leave. Cover by:@Moonlight_Bee @Moonlight_Bee All Rights Reserved. None of these images or pictures in this belong to me. They belong to their owners.Complete
Flower He Couldn't Pluck
It's a story of two people living on different sides of the same dimension. She dreaded his world, and he envied hers. She reminded him of a life he had loved once, cherished once. And he reminded her of a life she escaped once, feared once. A pretty decent job, the most wonderful family, silliest friends and a life she loved. Rose had it all until after one day someone decided to snatch it away from her. Why? Because the life she has been living was nothing but a cloak hiding humongous truth and secrets. He was the destroyer of the life she treasured and the creator of the life she never wanted to live. Highest rankings ever: #1 Jealousy #2 ObsessionComplete
One shots (Character X Fem.Reader)
Are you ready to dive into multiple stories of dark romance? Well, here's your chance. β Warnings β -THIS STORY IS MINE πPicture isn't mineπ πThere may be stuff that can trigger you, may contain murder, abuse, self harm and much more. If you are sensitive to these type of things, I strongly advise you not to read this.π πYou have seen this warning, so read at your own accord. π πHope you enjoy reading this. :3 π (Not sure if it'll be continued, also missing chapters are due to me not finishing them)
Beautiful Books And Reviews
Here you can find/receive: β’ Book Advertising (Features) β’ Book Ratings (/10) β’ Reads/Readers β’ Reviews β’ Recommendations β’ Improvements β’ Edits β’ Grammar Sweeps β’ Comment Suggestions/Corrections Honesty's the best policy and I'm too honest for my own good...and a bit hypocritical maybe, bite me! Welcome to book advertising, A.K.A - Beautiful Books and Reviews! You can find things to work on in your writing or you can find your next amazing book to read...win win! A/Note - READ THE INTRODUCTIONS AND COMMENT PAGE BEFORE COMMENTING β€οΈ Happy reading and writing beautiful ππComplete
The Song Of The Wolf (Unedited)
WATTPAD FEATURED - 30/11/2017 WATTYS 2018 LONGLIST - 31/08/2018 WATTPAD WEREWOLF FEATURED - 05/09/2020 WATTPAD EXPLORER WEREWOLF WEEK - 26/10/2020 [WORD COUNT: 110k] *I have begun posting the edited version on my page* In an era that gods dwelled among men and greed reigned the land, the selfish actions of a king and his sons damned them to take the form of nightmarish beasts. Forced to flee at the hands of their curse, the quest for refuge lead them past countless places, leaving whispers and legends in their wake. Finally, a safe haven was found and peace returned once more. But centuries later, the natural course of this story takes a sharp turn when a lavender-eyed girl arrives to disrupt their means of life in more ways than they could have ever foreseen.Complete
Shade Of Love
**** COMPLETE **** VERY RAUNCHY **** This novel centers around Faith, a young black woman in her early 20s that's given up on the thought of love. That is until she finds someone who makes her think of reconsidering it. After her abusive ex & the toxic relationship she had with him, who knew that being inlove again was even possible? She meets a dreamy guy named Omar who seems too good to be true. She at first struggles with the thought of opening up & loving again, but realizes he's everything she's ever wanted. Will he win her over? Will they last? What demons will they encounter on their journey? Does true love really conquer everything? Tune in & find out! Disclaimer β οΈ * There are certain parts of this story that are going to be rated 18+ only. I'm very sexual myself & wanted to make sure my readers felt that in my characters when reading this story. The mature content will have a warning in the beginning of the chapter, this is EXTREMELY explicit content.* β οΈ * There is also violence/crime in this book. If that triggers or makes you uncomfortable please don't read it, there are entirely too many chapters where that is mentioned or emphasized on. It's a piece of my work. * Cover by @emmel_concepts πΈ Rankings & Progress β’ #1 #BlackRomance ~ 6/20/21 β’ #1 #LoveScene ~ 7/2/21 β’ #1 #Romance ~ 5/19/22 β’ #1 #Melanin ~ 4/9/23 β’ Began publishing on 5/30/21 I own all copyrights to my writing. I however do not own any of the images in this novel. π€Complete
They were raised as weapons - seven boys and eight girls forged in the same underground hell, trained to be shadows, tools, killers. When the system burned, they split: ENHYPEN chose the law. Hearts2Hearts chose the underworld. Now, years later, they're on opposite sides of the same war - cops and criminals, brothers and sisters, ghosts chasing each other through bloodstained streets. But this isn't about justice. It's about power. Revenge. And the scars they left on each other. Because in this city, nothing runs deeper than family - except the wounds they gave each other. Let the chase begin. Started: April 20th, 2025. Ended: ? @llowness XXX Disclaimer! This is a work of fiction intended for mature audiences. It contains themes of violence, emotional trauma, sibling rivalry, psychological manipulation, criminal activity, and morally gray characters. Reader discretion is advised. All characters depicted are fictional versions of real-life artists and are not intended to reflect their real personalities, beliefs, or actions. This story is purely for creative and entertainment purposes. Please note: This story also explores sensitive topics including abuse of power, betrayal, emotional neglect, and the lasting scars of broken family dynamics. If any of these themes may be triggering to you, proceed with caution. Respect the artists. Respect the art. Support with love. Number 4 in #catandmouse
More detailsContent Guidelines