He's A Werewolf, My Mate, Oh, and Also The Alpha King!

He's A Werewolf, My Mate, Oh, and Also The Alpha King!

801K Reads 24.5K Votes 41 Part Story
Darla Gene By daria_16 Completed

*Wattys 2017*

*In the middle of rewriting chapters, sorry for the confusion*

Carter is unlike any other girl you know. For one, she's a werewolf! But also she can go from 1 to 100 in 10 seconds flat. She isn't afraid to fight for what she's wants and is willing to do anything for her family. 

Carter has always wanted a mate, she's loves the idea. But what happens when Carter's mate is the future Alpha King? 

My dad says when I get one MILLION reads, then I can get a puppy! Help the cause.

When you say "That is so hard headed." It sounds very strange and doesn't make sense. Maybe say something like 'he is so hard headed' or 'that boy is so hard headed' it makes more sense. Just a suggestion 😊
No period at the end of this sentence. ( Please don't get mad with me, I just know that I like when people tell me my errors so I can fix them.)
I had this blaring loudly!!! It made the story soooooooooo much more real for me!!!
The threw you used is incorrect. It is supposed to be 'through'. If I catch any grammarical errors I will comment about it. Please do not take it as me being rude, I just wish to better your grammar. If you wish me to stop pointing out the errors, please tell me so. 😊
Ask should have an 's' after to become 'asks' and nod should be the same to switch to 'nods'.
MargoWest MargoWest Jul 26
Can't stop, can't stop the feet
                              Won't stop, won't stop the beat and go
                              Everybody, move your feet and feel united
                              Oh oh oh