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Captured and Crowned

Captured and Crowned

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Elizabeth Newsom By ElizabethNewsom Completed

When Annette is captured and wed to the king of another world, she plans to escape anyway she can. Alaric is the immortal king of Torva. He's cold, brutal, and in need of a queen. Annette isn't what he expected, but he's never lost a battle and he most certainly won't lose to a 17 year-old mortal. As Annette fights him at every turn, he tries to forcefully tame her. Who will succeed?

Girl, what is your deal? 
                              Methinks it's jealousy. Afraid Josh will fall for Anne when you like him?
Parents, why are you doing this?! This is how every stalker case starts out! And when nobody believes the victim, guess how everyone finds out they were telling the truth all along? 
                              When it becomes a  M U R D E R   C A S E. (OR KIDNAPPING. )
The only thing you might want to work on would be the paragraph length. It is easier and more engaging for readers to have shorter paragrahs. Other than that, I love this book so far!
Oh man, I have always wanted to play those instruments. Anne's skills are #Goals.
crazy_kg crazy_kg Jul 20, 2016
For some reason I feel like if this was a movie she would be played by Kristin Stewart[ probably spelt her name wrong]
KAWerts KAWerts Oct 06, 2016
I wonder what happened before to make them not believe her. Right now I'm just in disbelief that they wouldn't even think it's a possibility, it's a dangerous world out there & stalkers don't always have an exact reason.