Captured and Crowned

Captured and Crowned

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Elizabeth Newsom By ElizabethNewsom Completed

When Annette is captured and wed to the king of another world, she plans to escape anyway she can. Alaric is the immortal king of Torva. He's cold, brutal, and in need of a queen. Annette isn't what he expected, but he's never lost a battle and he most certainly won't lose to a 17 year-old mortal. As Annette fights him at every turn, he tries to forcefully tame her. Who will succeed?

  • adventure
  • captive
  • captured
  • clean
  • crowned
  • dragon
  • eternal
  • fairy
  • fantasy
  • fiction
  • immortal
  • kidnapped
  • king
  • love
  • queen
  • romance
  • royalty
  • sweet
  • unicorn
Alright, my honest first thoughts are the first chapter was well paced, and the book idea is interesting. But the cover, title and summery could use a lot of work. Genuinely excited to read this though
Girl, what is your deal? 
                              
                              Methinks it's jealousy. Afraid Josh will fall for Anne when you like him?
Parents, why are you doing this?! This is how every stalker case starts out! And when nobody believes the victim, guess how everyone finds out they were telling the truth all along? 
                              
                              When it becomes a  M U R D E R   C A S E. (OR KIDNAPPING. )
- - Mar 12
The only thing you might want to work on would be the paragraph length. It is easier and more engaging for readers to have shorter paragrahs. Other than that, I love this book so far!
Oh man, I have always wanted to play those instruments. Anne's skills are #Goals.
EnidanFawn EnidanFawn May 18
I play the piano some, and I tried to learn the Violin, but It really confused me. A lot.