we have only one shot to get this right. different story, different setting, different people but they have one thing in common it will never happen again- at least for now. .
@JanuaryHarper its a full of mystery.. and i like your work!!lolz
i appreciate the plot of the story.. the rising and falling action - you totally made an illusion..and thats a paint a pic.!! nice:)
@chairsniffa ahahaha. .tell that to harper!! hahaha he thinks he knows it all. .thank you!!
Wow that paints a complex picture alright lol :) both of you can write I am a fan now
Hmm.. as I guessed you do write well. Well I guess this means I am your fan and will continue reading your stuff.
i think i'll be editing this. .needs more visual . . january why did you write something crappy as this?