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one shot to get this right (one-shot stories)

one shot to get this right (one-shot stories)

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January By JanuaryHarper Updated Nov 24, 2010

we have only one shot to get this right. different story, different setting, different people but they have one thing in common it will never happen again- at least for now. .

@JanuaryHarper its a full of mystery.. and i like your work!!lolz
i appreciate the plot of the story.. the rising and falling action - you totally made an illusion..and thats a paint a pic.!! nice:)
JanuaryHarper JanuaryHarper Sep 23, 2010
@chairsniffa ahahaha. .tell that to harper!! hahaha he thinks he knows it all. .thank you!!
chairsniffa chairsniffa Sep 21, 2010
Wow that paints a complex picture alright lol :) both of you can write I am a fan now
A_unanimous_yes A_unanimous_yes Aug 05, 2010
Hmm.. as I guessed you do write well. Well I guess this means I am your fan and will continue reading your stuff.
JanuaryHarper JanuaryHarper Aug 04, 2010
i think i'll be editing this. .needs more visual . . january why did you write something crappy as this?
                              FU harper!!!
                              ditto. .