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the greatest love (the hobbit)

the greatest love (the hobbit)

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the_elven_princess1 By the_elven_princess1 Completed

love is like a game, you can win it or lose it, or you just don't understand it.

the elven king is cold hearted, after the death of his beloved wife, she left him without an heir to the throne, his heart is broken but will he risk it all for love? he has a second chance to love. will he learn to love at any cost?

Evelyn is from Rivendell,  she is a guard in the army who is sent to the woodland realm to warn the so cold hearted king, will see fall in love and repair his broken heart?

Lee pace - king thranduil of mirkwood 
Evelyn - first picture No name for this person just found on internet
Orlando bloom - Legolas Greenleaf of mirkwood

  • evelyn
  • fanfiction
  • romance
  • thehobbit
  • thranduil
DraganaJovanovic1 DraganaJovanovic1 Jun 29, 2017
The start was ok (Y) I like it. The ideas are good. But the problem is ........ You dont have dots, notches, big letters of names ... ahhh .... the sentences are to long, so I cant get out of it :D 
                              This story is like a ROSE filled with thorns
                              I love it <3 but am lost >/////////////<
LuthienSeregon LuthienSeregon Jun 16, 2016
Well, the start us so good, that I'll go on reading! So it has to be a good start!
LuthienSeregon LuthienSeregon Jun 16, 2016
Probably you could wrote names like this: Leo, not like this: leo. I'm not English, so I don't know how to call the difference... Something we didn't learn in school...
LuthienSeregon LuthienSeregon Jun 16, 2016
Wow, your style is very good! I have one question: are you writing with your computer or not?
the_elven_princess1 the_elven_princess1 May 17, 2015
thank you so much!! that has really helped me im new at writing so that feedback was great :)