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Crow's feathers - Naruto fanfiction

Crow's feathers - Naruto fanfiction

510K Reads 10.6K Votes 110 Part Story
thehoodedgirl By the_hooded_girl Completed

After years of banishment the fourth Suna sibling returns. But why now of all times and what is her connection with Konoha? It is said she was involved with a certain criminal organization. Are the rumours about her true? And why was she banished in the first place?

SolarisVoid SolarisVoid Dec 17, 2016
From the intro alone I'm worried about her being a Mary Sue. But I'll read on - maybe it'll turn out that she's the exact opposite.
- - Dec 08, 2016
This is so good, but I'm still very worried about her being an overpowered character. Although the prologue's making me to hype to care AT THE MOMENT.
- - Mar 27, 2016
Omg everyone's writing lengthy comments but I'm like speechless.
JCKang JCKang Mar 26, 2015
Nice narrative voice, and already plenty of world building without being to overt.
the_hooded_girl the_hooded_girl Aug 01, 2013
@kitsune107 LOL it's not finished yet. I have more chapters to come.
                              @emerden101 Yeah, I personally don't think she's Mary Sue-ish at all. But you can't keep everyone happy. I stand by my story. And I'm proud of it. Thanks for reading :)
emerden101 emerden101 Aug 01, 2013
Love the intro! And for all Mary Sue accusers..... idk....if I met up with that kind of comment it would hurt a little....
                              But if you DO feel like it matters to share your opinions...make the harsh ones softer! :3