My Irresistible Best Friend

My Irresistible Best Friend

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Soha By darkeyes11 Updated Jan 26

Christian Andrew Reyes: Male, Straight, Rich, Charming, Sexy, and easily tempts women to his bed.

Emberly Jane Thompson: Female, Straight, Middle class, Beautiful brunette, Sexy, and easily falls into a trap.

But there seem to be no chances of Emberly falling into Christian's bed. What or who is stopping her?

How could they be so comfortable with each other, yet stay 'Best Friends'?

Don't bother your brain with thinking, just read their story to find out!

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 #Ethereal Life seems pretty good for her until she falls for her closest friend's husband. ..That's what I'm assuming
You already stated these facts, you don’t need to repeat them again. It’s redundant, and cuts off the flow of the story 👍🏾
1. Where did this character come from? You kind of just dropped him in without any introduction or foreshadowing of his presence; it’s confusing.
 #Ethereal I'm assuming she's very pretty. And when I read this my stupid self at first thought she's the bride.
 #Ethereal Oh great everyone's looking at him. I bet you too Ember
lucaelum lucaelum Dec 21, 2017
                              It's paragraphs like this that show a bit of the mistakes you pose on the reader. Simplify the sentences but maintain the poetry. Saying that she obviously wasn't rich isn't needed. 
                              Leave out the words and sentences and details that you don't have to point out