Angel's Heartbeat: A Dark Romance (Human Slayer and Angel)

Angel's Heartbeat: A Dark Romance (Human Slayer and Angel)

7.9K Reads 153 Votes 6 Part Story
Kate By Silver-Katsiys Updated Oct 27, 2010

After being expelled and shunned by the I'Katil community, 17 year old Sadie moves to a school in Brighton, England. The last thing she expects to find there is the very thing she was born to destroy. An Angel with a past so dark he has almost left the light. Somehow Sadie finds herself working with the enigmatic and obtrusive Raziel and trying the handle the thousands of illicit emotions he ignites in her. 

Mz-Hyde- Mz-Hyde- Sep 07, 2012
I love stories about angels, especially ones like this one. So far, I've read chapters 1 and 2, but I can tell that you've thought a lot about this story before you started writing it. Good job and keep up the great work! :)
singXoWRITExOpaint singXoWRITExOpaint Jan 28, 2011
I really like this, and you have a great talent. I've noticed that there are many great writers nowadays from England. There are grammatical errors but other than that I love it. :D
Blush18 Blush18 Sep 09, 2010
Your dialogs are very matured there's no sign of hesitation, you weren't rushing it...very well written... I hope to see more work from you :D
Blush18 Blush18 Sep 09, 2010
wow... I love the descriptions...I'm surprised this hasn't gotten many votes...Im definitely voting for this... and you're going on my top 5 ;D well I;m thinking of making it a top 10 lol so yeah ;D lol keep me updated... 
Silver-Katsiys Silver-Katsiys Sep 01, 2010
@iceskate2 Ha thanks! I'll probably post another sometime tommorrow afternoon :) x
Natiluvs2read Natiluvs2read Sep 01, 2010
good I saw alittle mistake but nothing major 
                              grrr thost guy that knock her out are real jerks 
                              hehe love the lenght of the story and the spacing makes it easier to read