You Chose The Wrong Person To Kidnap

You Chose The Wrong Person To Kidnap

3 Part Story 1.7K Reads 60 Votes
tifagene By tifagene Updated Jul 13, 2011

Rain Knightly is an orphan vampire. She lives by herself, "apparently" looked after by her aunt who hates her, but likes it better this way. Every night, she goes out to a club, to fight others, but one day, a mysterious boy goes to watch her. And then turns up at her school. His name is Todd, and seems perfectly normal, but what is he really?

ymarocks ymarocks Aug 29, 2011 03:53AM
Love vampires storie n this story goes on my library. Awesome.
Kalyington Kalyington Aug 14, 2011 07:14PM
"I could swim to Japan with just one breath for God's sake." Bahaha, this cracked. me. up.
                              Anyway, good story, rather interesting and I can't wait to read about the kidnapping and who does it exactly... I want to say the obvious, but I don't  know if it's obvious so... I won't. :P
SabrinaR SabrinaR Aug 13, 2011 10:21AM
I must admit I am a sucker for vampire stories, I absolutely love them. 
                              This is good and easy to read buts needs more adjectives. Other than that, overall its very captivating. 
                              SabrinaR xx
AuroraEmerald AuroraEmerald Aug 11, 2011 03:51PM
OMG! Loved it. Great descriptions throughout. Very easy to read and enjoy. *Voted*
W-O-W. I love it :D I love vampire stories :P Great description!
Tazza14 Tazza14 Aug 03, 2011 07:25AM
wow!! This is really good! I can't wait to read the rest!!! Voted, fanned and now added to my library :D