Kiss Me Deadly

Kiss Me Deadly

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Dakota By ethereal_antiquity Completed

Viridian Steel was raised to be the perfect weapon. 

Born with the ability to copy another supernaturals' powers with a single kiss, she was perfect for one ruthless leader to fulfill his plans of enslaving all who oppose him. But Viridian has plans of her own.  After a lifetime of being Angelo Octavian's monster, she's determined to stop him from corrupting another soul -especially not the powerful boy with the deadly touch that he has his eye on. 

Four years later, after tirelessly searching for the one whose touch is deadly, she's finally found him. However, Archer Valentine wasn't exactly what she expected him to be. Now, as she faces her dark past and the ones she left behind, Viridian must gain Archer's trust, but that's easier said than done for a girl with a dangerous kiss.

Just one kiss and her powers are released.

Just one kiss and you're at her mercy.

Just one kiss and the power is hers.

WOW DANG. WOW DANG. WOW. DAAAANG THIS IS GOOD. IM SUPER EXCITED.
-kalopsia -kalopsia Feb 24, 2015
Must. Keep. Reading. But may I just say, THANK YOU FOR CAPITALIZING YOUR EYES! I'm sorry... It's a big thing for me, lol!
StarvingLunatic StarvingLunatic Feb 24, 2015
This really piqued my interest. I love that the spelling is correct, and the grammar is proper. There aren't too many professionally written stories on here, but I honestly feel this will turn out good. I'll have to see.
-unstable -unstable Feb 23, 2015
This is a great start! How you write flows very freely and the paragraphs aren't congested or too long. You have a very nice way with words too! It's a very nice start to what I'm sure will be an amazing story :3
                              Keep it up c:
benignsmiles benignsmiles Feb 06, 2015
These first few paragraphs really really add to the mood instead of being so generic that it doesn't really have a mood
WriterAtHeart96 WriterAtHeart96 Oct 11, 2014
I can see it's good beginning but you need more details in the story and watch for the verb tenses.