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The deathly boarding school

The deathly boarding school

1.6K Reads 20 Votes 6 Part Story
Nikiii By Nikiii Updated Aug 24, 2011

Rosalie is a girl whos always played it safe, shes been pampered through out her entire life, but then when her mom dies her and her sister are transfered to a boarding school. Little does she know that this is no ordinary boarding school , its an all boys boarding school for immortals like her. Follow Rosalies dangers adventures as she struggles to keep herself alive and discover another side of her.

CjayS42 CjayS42 Nov 20, 2010
Now this is more interesting. As mentioned in the previous chapter, more description would be brilliant. Also, avoid this like ***in the dream***. Use whatever else you can to make it "flow" instead of jump erratically like that. 
SpeedReader8117 SpeedReader8117 Sep 03, 2010
@render_waverPQ What do you mean??? I thought the spacing was perfect. After all a paragraph is supposed to be 3-5 sentences long. But anywyas, I love the story. I'm bookmarking it right now. :))) lol
Nikiii Nikiii Sep 01, 2010
@render_waverPQ  I dnt really understand :S , if you could explain more id love to try out your option . 
render_waverPQ render_waverPQ Sep 01, 2010
your story is really good, but you should do more spacing. just an option =]